Fiona Davidson

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Come - Poem by Fiona Davidson

Come take a little walk with me
See the world through my eyes
Feel my emotions flowing deep
Touch the scars upon my heart

Hear my thoughts as they fly
To places once so dear to me
Trace the outlines of my life
Then tell me it's alright again

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  • Robert Melliard (6/7/2014 10:11:00 PM)

    Dear Fiona,
    You probably don't remember me but we exchanged messages a few years ago. I miss your comments. I have read your five most recent poems and am impressed by the power of their feeling and sensuality. It sounds as if you have one of the best love-lives ever known. Please read one or two of my poems again if you have time.
    Best wishes,
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  • (1/15/2010 6:18:00 PM)

    I have revisited ground that I held sacred and wished I had not. In my case it was best to visit new ground. A very deep and meaningful poem Fi.Made me think about my own circumstances.
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  • (1/8/2010 12:10:00 PM)

    Though brief, this is an excellent and expressive poem, Fi, and your life is indeed alright again! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2010 2:02:00 AM)

    A friendly little poem about companionship. No frills. Sweet. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2010 9:04:00 PM)

    high emotions fi only you can put them in place (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 3, 2010

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