Come Out Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Come Out

Rating: 4.7


My sincere prayers
Coming from different layers
Inner outer core of heart
Feeling very nice from start
Ways different but not to part

You got to recover
Not to suffer
You may differ
Still I offer
My sincere prayer

There is good saying
Attention always paying
Foundation stone laying
For better relation and understanding
Good carrying words but not offending

You got to come out
No to simple fallout
Nothing to think about
Think of good future
Good feelings to nurture

You have to march ahead
Cool mind with straight head
Nothing to worry
Not in hurry
Not to feel sorry

You may come out of shock
Sound may not stop from clock
It will not block
Your straight path
If you retain good faith

What else one can pray?
Will it pay?
With new hope and bright ray
You may go ahead and find
Very good people around and very kind

So come out of sick mind
Ways and means find
Shower the love and blessings
You will find world with you
Only trust in Thou

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 January 2010

yeah, sometimes freedom is something hard to have but something worth fighting for because all of us should be free people... thanks for sharing!

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Chand Shikari 14 July 2010

My sincere prayers Coming from different layers Inner outer core of heart Feeling very nice from start....nice to come out....10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 January 2010

A poem full of sound advices how to come out and feel happy at the end.

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William Sicaju 28 January 2010

I like this poem alot. I recently got serious about writing and I hope I will get to a point were my poetry gets this good. It very insperational.

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Adam Reed 26 January 2010

great choice to write a poem on considering your readers. whether that was advice to yourself or not. you've helped out some of the lucky few who got to read this. good show =)

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Katellyne Baker 26 January 2010

i like it...so much about freedom and it all makes so much sence.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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