Vallerie Lobell


Come To Me - Poem by Vallerie Lobell

Meet me at the park again,
On the sunrising side where we sat when,
My love was blooming, I sat there so unassuming,
The passersby had not a clue, of how I was adoring you,

The pecan tree, it's leaves were turning,
Deep inside my heart a burning,
Time seemed to fly like a big city train,
Then you were gone, all that remained,

Was the essence of your noble being,
My eyes wide open yet not seeing,
Past the place I'd seen you last,
I knew then the die was cast,

Take me back to that day in Fall,
Let me stand beside you tall,
This time to while away the hours,
Come to me in shine or showers,


Comments about Come To Me by Vallerie Lobell

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (5/18/2008 7:15:00 AM)

    what a wonderful poem of love
    as pecan leaves turn the heart vto burn
    even the passers by didn`t know it
    when park was still packed by the lovers...............a unique imagery of dazzling with beauty by the colours, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
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  • (4/9/2008 9:32:00 AM)

    An excellent composition! I am sure you would enjoy Hazelmarie Elliott, especially 'Between The Now And Then.' Look forward to sharing more of your work! Thanks.... (Report)Reply

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (2/10/2008 4:25:00 AM)

    so beautiful................. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/2/2006 4:06:00 PM)

    Great poem. God bless all poets-MJG. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2006 10:10:00 AM)

    What a nice recollection of the past day. The autumn scenery fits here wonderfully. Fall is beautiful and colorful, but it is also a bit sad - exactly like the recollection of the feeling.

    Jolanta
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  • (9/15/2006 6:49:00 AM)

    Love and its reflections...what would we do without it/them :) Written with feeling...hope it's still there!
    Pleased to make your acquaintance :)
    Jack.
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  • (9/15/2006)

    Wow, what imagery! ! ! This piece was very well written. I especially liked the stanza where you said, and I quote
    'Was the essence of your noble being,
    My eyes wide open yet not seeing,
    Past the place I'd seen you last,
    I knew then the die was cast, '
    This was so profound in imagery as well as content....this was worth the experience to you if you can reflect that clearly. Well done, well written.
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  • (9/13/2006 1:22:00 PM)

    Beautiful flow and such a wonderful soft edge to this one
    Thankyou for shaing this
    Love duncan X
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  • (9/11/2006 6:28:00 AM)

    Meet me at the park again,
    On the sunrising side where we sat when,
    My love was blooming, I sat there so unassuming,
    The passersby had not a clue, of how I was adoring you,

    verse makes a new bloom of a cool ailing emotion in own mind, it dashing to a plummeting.....
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 7, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, September 3, 2010


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