Sourav RCY

Come To Me

Do you want to be like me?
Tell me do you want to be?
Do you want to see the things
The way I want you to see?

Do you want to be lonely?
Lonely & alone like me
Navigate in the sorrow of blank sea
Come and taste my destiny

Do you want to feel the life?
The way I feel
Do you want to face the matters
The way each day I deal

Everyone has his own life
Own way of living
Different perception towards life
We are all different human beings

But do you want to live my life?
Live it for a single day
Share my views & share my sight
Then express your say

Do you want to get in to my soul?
Live the life for me
Do you want to make a new story unfold
Have faith & touch the honesty

This will be a strange experience for you
Believe me it's true
Awesome, amazing and something new
And you'll know what I am going through!

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 19, 2006
Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 17, 2010

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  • Rasheed Alqahas (10/14/2006 12:56:00 PM)

    very nice poem, very nice feeling, we are mankind, have different life, but we are in one world to know each other.happy life. greeting.
    rasheed

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  • Rasheed Alqahas (10/14/2006 12:54:00 PM)

    very nice poem, very nice feeling, we are mankind, have different life, but we are in one world to know each other.happy life. greeting.
    rashees

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  • Nibedita Deb (8/14/2006 12:57:00 AM)

    Nice poem Sourav....I like the interrogative format...Deb.

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  • Brian DornBrian Dorn (7/29/2006 4:14:00 PM)

    Sourav, great write... I like the concept. I've often wondered what it would be like to walk in someone else's shoes, even for just a day... what an amazing experience that would be. Well done! !
    Brian

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  • Josh Burkhart (7/29/2006 2:19:00 PM)

    Im not too good at complementing poems, I only write but this poem in my opinion is very deep. It touches and relates well to alot of people. I can see many people in my life including myself saying this to themselves. I think about things that way alot. I just never could have put it the way of you did. Good Job, great poem and thanks for sharing this with us.

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  • Preeti - is here! (7/26/2006 12:35:00 PM)

    Oh! I'm sure it will be strange to see what you see and to be in your shoes.
    Nice questioning poem!

    Preets

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