Darling Poem by Sourav RCY


Rating: 4.3

Hey my darling don’t be so sad
It’s not good but it’s not that bad
You’ve lost just one battle
Rest of the war is yet to be fought
You’ve to save the things from being distraught

Oh my angel don’t feel so low
Bring back your smile that shining glow
What is past and that is gone
Those were just bad days, bad phase of your life
Life is calling you forget all those strifes

O my sweetheart please don’t cry
Don’t lose your heart without a try
You’ve few dead dreams
Now put them in to the grave
Stand up with the time and be a little brave

Darling darling! Don’t look at the dust
You have to keep the faith & your trust
Just one wrong move
Now get ready for the right
You’re not alone baby, together we’ll fight

Yes my sweet lady I’m with you
My love kisses you in everything you do
This is the time for new beginning
Just go ahead and fight with no fear & aghast
And I will take care of your broken heart

Michael Gale 17 July 2006

Nicely written. Excellent poem of love. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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Daniel Tyler 17 July 2006

lovely and uplifting.

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Linda Ori 18 July 2006

Very nice writing here, tender and compassionate. Good Job! Linda

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Alison Cassidy 19 July 2006

Sourav, The girl in question is indeed lucky to have someont like you to support her. The theme of this poem is timeless and its sincerity, very obvious. Warmly, Alison

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Nicky McNeil 21 July 2006

great writing very heartfelt words

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Anjali Sinha 17 June 2008

hey sourav, you are really great. so loving and tender and full of support to your lady love. i envy her. keep writing-excellent work Anju

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Brian Dorn 29 July 2006

Sourav, that's what I call support... great poem! ! Brian

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Preeti - is here! 26 July 2006

It's amazing. A lovey-dovery inspirational poem I must say! Preets

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Wan Little 24 July 2006

Very sweet. Nice way of writing. Uplifted poem.

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Anjana Aravind 24 July 2006

Beautiful write Sourav.... A perfect 10 from me Anjana

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