Come To Me Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Come To Me

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Come to me when you feel helplessness
With tiredness and unhappiness on the face
I shall take your care and nurture
Be assured of safe refuge here

I am savior of condemned criminals
I give equal treatment on their arrival
See their back ground and intention as well
Then decide where he should go whether to heaven or hell

I might have subjected you to the cruel tests
It was only possible that I could offer you as best
You were intended to suffer but not as bad fate
But to stand up against it as solid bat

Today you have become old
As if all the impurities are added to the gold
You are as ripe as mango fruit
Life may be over any time with single shot

Think not much about what happened
How was time against you and its weapon sharpened!
You stood well over ground and lost nothing
We provided you safe cover and offered something

Age may matter and feel at the later stage
Memory may fade and loose the coverage
You have no chance to make others laugh
As we have already taken away your better half

You had created unformidable position on earth
No one has dared so far to threaten you with death
I am proud of your stay there as missionary
You delivered the message whenever was felt necessary

Come on my son to a original fold
This is your permanent refuge and world
You shall be here under my direct supervision
You may see clearly from here with divine vision

I love to protect the human beings and earth as well
This is only place where our message can be spelled
We send messiahs and angels from time to time
They perform well but meet the ill fate sometimes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Come to me when you feel helplessness With tiredness and unhappiness on the face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Queeny Gona Nurturing is very vital and it is met with HIM. God is God of two parties! I liked these points most in this write up! Thanks for sharing it Hasmukh Mehta a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Indranil Bhaduri 08 August 2012

It's a gem of a poem Sir. I really am in shortage of adjectives to express my feelings after reading. Thank you so much. Will read all of yours one by one. I sincerely would like to invite your attention to my humble contributions and post your most valuable comments which will help me the actual worth of my efforts as a budding writer.

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Kasia Fedyk 08 August 2012

Incredible and Beautiful and true and vibrant in so many ways i can describe the soul that writes with such profoundness. Sublime!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

Vijay Gupta very nice 2 minutes ago ·

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Godfrey Morris 11 August 2012

Thanks for your invitation. I think you have done well with this piece.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Dear Sir, By reading the title of the poem itself, readers would find solace. When I read the poem, I am reminded of the following lines from Wordsworth's poem The Solitary Reaper': No Nightingale did ever chaunt More welcome notes to weary bands Of travellers in some shady haunt, Among Arabian Sands: . Sir, every line of your poem seems heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai K. Sadasivan, Chennai Aug 10,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Abdul Wahab beautiful is yr poem, more beautiful is yr wisdom of rhyme, and marvellous are the thoughts expressed craftly in an exquiste poem, i love it.. 11 hours ago · Like

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Captain Cur 08 August 2012

A very deep and impressive poem. Our time here is short in human form. Your beliefs are strong of a better world, as you write, Come on my son to a original fold, This is your permanent refuge and world. Great words of faith.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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