Come To My Arms Poem by vittal vandavasu

Come To My Arms

Rating: 5.0


The leaves have fallen
A mild breeze plays
under an oak tree I sit to see
Your memory of past days

The green soft grass is spread,
Flamboyant flowers bloom
Yet I long to be dead
I so wanted you as my groom

The sky is all clear and blue
Like a blanket covering me
While i sleep I dream of you
In nature's cradle I'm in glee

I remember we met here
Then it was fair love and bliss
So dearly you called me dear
Ah! how desperately i long for the past

We used to sing a merry song
In chorus with the songbird
I know not where it went wrong
My love was not heard

The songbird flew away
You went away
the breeze fades away
Trees never dance today

But now, enchanted by your memory
Everything has come to life
But yet i celebrate alone every ceremony
I live by your memory and fear of knife

The way you smiled
You shook my hand
All i have is a piece of paper
On which you wrote

The paper is my most prized possession
I shall go the grave with it in my pocket
Ignorant of my love you took the decision
I'm all woebegone amidst your blissful racket

WOULD YOU HAVE STAYED
IF YOU KNEW
I LOVED YOU
BUT WAS THE WAY ALREADY PAVED?

I stare at your piece of paper
You scribbled for if i ever wanted to talk
My way seems damper
I'm blind and need you to help me walk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Gupta 24 September 2009

'very loving expression' regards

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Seema Chowdhury 24 September 2009

very nice and emotional poem. life is a series of emotions. we see both ups and downs. so don't give up just wait for your turn. it will come bck to you with smiles. take care read some of my new poems too. i just submitted 4 new poems. they are on pg 1,2 & 3

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

emotions of love well expressed in this poem...10

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Mubeen Sadhika 26 September 2009

Good expression. Nicely written. Deserves 10+++++++

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Maya Hershey 26 September 2009

well i must admit... its a very interesting poem... nice words... beautiful dictions...10+ good work.

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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

Among my favourites.. Your pain lay between the words.. Almost touchable. I like your work..

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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

Among my favourites.. Your pain lay between the words.. Almost touchable. I like your work..

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Eyan Desir 01 October 2009

....Well written I felt some words didnt go hand to hand But overall I love this poem... well written... Are you sure that you're older?

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Jazz Annis 29 September 2009

that was a poem worth reading 10 very emotional i could feel your emotions as i read on in the poem very very well written! ! =)

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Anusha Subramanian 29 September 2009

A nice loving, Emotional poem.. I like it..10plus

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