Streaming of curl hairs blown upwards
Petals of Eucalyptus sticking to the neck
Dripping sweats melancholic and spats
Moisturize the tarmac
At the far end of the crude muddy river
Purging a smile of chronic guilt
Embodied and lamented
Surging through foreign branches
Expandable for warranty
Double seaming for secrecy
Smitten and hasten serpent
Nodded and looked up to the mourning sky
Whispering words of ancient phrases
Whooping echoes of hungry wolves
Torching the night with annoyed souls
Merciful has scouted the twilights
No leading paths
No hide out
You’re doomed
Hi Sulaiman, You have much very beautiful and touching phrases - finds, and this strongly is pleasant to me: '...At the far end of the crude muddy river Purging a smile of chronic guilt... Tsira
this is a pretty sweet write bro... very creepy subject, especially the talk of wolves...good job
Explosive visual imagery, wolves with annoyed souls...you reached deep here Sulaiman...Every read is an amazing journey, your words form the walls to your soul my friend, *10* Best wishes Jon.
the last five lines bring the poem home. Scary stuff, that voodoo.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
powerful imagery - strong. I recently posted one called; magic' you might like to see. Shaun.