* The Fall * Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

* The Fall *

Rating: 4.4

The mist crosses
The lonesome ocean
With sporadic sighs
Making a huge comeback
Out of raining bullets
From sparkling stars
Taming turbulence isn’t a rarity
But a cup of coffee
Fishmongers maneuver fish laden tugs
Had flashback nightmares
The silence
That breaks dream
Out of casket

The mountain that stands tall
Behind the horizon
Stops vomiting its minerals
Open the path of adoration

A varsity of perspective
Infinites mass antiquities
The natives wait
Chanting songs of universal
A new lease of life emerges
Tradition of ages

The first love that anchors
On the Paradise
Brings smile of ambulation
Hope of pro-creation
Another frontier
Another land
New religion
New language

An annexation
Without bloodshed

Saadat Tahir 01 July 2009

A fantastic.. thoughtful poem …contains.. beautiful ideas ...loved it.... well done ….nice work! cheers

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Jerik Middleton 28 June 2009

great poem...awesome wording and amazing message behind the words...loved it let me know when you right another one so i can read it love your work!

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Anthony Han 25 June 2009

Nice poem, i didnt have time to read this sooner but finally did and its amazin, very deep and has nice words to it good work 10+

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Duh Huh 25 June 2009

i agree with Lalay and Sumaira. Its a deep and magical poem. Thank you for sharing :)

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Lalay Allan 24 June 2009

This is very deep and profound, my friend. Thought provoking piece is your signature. Congratulations! Thanks for leading me to read this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2009

Hope of pro-creation Another frontier Another land New religion New language another dream land to venture....beautiful...10' read mine dramland mary to marry and miss i miss u

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Melissia Ann Senter 01 August 2009

A very deep, meaningful, and most excellent poem, imagitive and fantastic write thanks for sharing Melissia Ann

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 July 2009

From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 10: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: The Fall 'The Fall' is a very deep and meaningful poem. Good job asusual. Best, Ulveena Aitzaz

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Hey, that was nice! Credible..10

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Surya . 03 July 2009

really imaginative. looks like a new dawn in on.nice to read. haunting too a10+++ from me surya

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