poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

* The Fall *

The mist crosses
The lonesome ocean
With sporadic sighs
Making a huge comeback
Out of raining bullets
From sparkling stars
Taming turbulence isn’t a rarity
But a cup of coffee
Fishmongers maneuver fish laden tugs
Had flashback nightmares
The silence
That breaks dream
Out of casket

Suddenly
The mountain that stands tall
Behind the horizon
Stops vomiting its minerals
Open the path of adoration
Commences

Entrapment
A varsity of perspective
Infinites mass antiquities
The natives wait
Chanting songs of universal
A new lease of life emerges
Tradition of ages

The first love that anchors
On the Paradise
Brings smile of ambulation
Hope of pro-creation
Another frontier
Another land
New religion
New language

An annexation
Without bloodshed

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, June 12, 2009

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Comments about * The Fall * by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/3/2009 11:59:00 AM)

    Hope of pro-creation
    Another frontier
    Another land
    New religion
    New language
    another dream land to venture....beautiful...10'

    read mine dramland mary to marry and miss i miss u

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  • Melissia Ann SenterMelissia Ann Senter (8/1/2009 9:17:00 AM)

    A very deep, meaningful, and most excellent poem, imagitive and fantastic write thanks for sharing Melissia Ann

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/24/2009 8:27:00 AM)

    From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 10: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: The Fall


    'The Fall' is a very deep and meaningful poem. Good job asusual.

    Best,
    Ulveena Aitzaz

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  • Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan (7/22/2009 8:48:00 PM)

    Hey, that was nice! Credible..10

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  • Surya . (7/3/2009 8:22:00 PM)

    really imaginative. looks like a new dawn in on.nice to read. haunting too
    a10+++ from me
    surya

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/1/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    A fantastic.. thoughtful poem …contains.. beautiful ideas
    ...loved it....

    well done ….nice work!
    cheers

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  • Jerik Middleton (6/28/2009 7:46:00 PM)

    great poem...awesome wording and amazing message behind the words...loved it let me know when you right another one so i can read it love your work!

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  • Anthony Han (6/25/2009 4:49:00 PM)

    Nice poem, i didnt have time to read this sooner but finally did and its amazin, very deep and has nice words to it good work 10+

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  • Duh Huh (6/25/2009 3:17:00 AM)

    i agree with Lalay and Sumaira. Its a deep and magical poem. Thank you for sharing :)

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  • Lalay Allan (6/24/2009 6:23:00 AM)

    This is very deep and profound, my friend. Thought provoking piece is your signature. Congratulations! Thanks for leading me to read this.

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  • Marie Diop (6/22/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Just lovely. :)

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (6/22/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    very interesting piece...

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  • Livvy Peacock (6/21/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    Beautiful writing - i love it - 10

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  • Azadeh Nemati (6/21/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    this poem is very rough, it is interesting in a way!

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  • sumaira .....ir (6/21/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    g8! ! ..u have magic in your hands dear..
    SUPERB! !
    +++++++++10
    wid lov
    sumaira

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (6/21/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    this is a beautful one friend/....diction you v used can mesmerize many hearts...thanks for this one 1o

    regards
    shan

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  • Shaik Zakeer Hussain (6/21/2009 1:21:00 AM)

    A very beautiful piece of work. keep writing brother.

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  • Nimal Dunuhinga (6/20/2009 9:59:00 AM)

    Fall is a great poem from a deep heart.

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  • Maxislam Beauty (6/20/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    This is all very great than I can ever Imagine.

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  • Ernest Riis Bansah (6/20/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    nice poem...keep writing more

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