Conclusions Poem by anais vionet

Conclusions

Rating: 5.0


Don't let anyone
with bad eyebrows give you life
advice - it ends badly.

I don't mind seeing my ex with
someone else, I usually donate my
old things to the less fortunate.

I wonder how many
calories I burn jumping
to wrong conclusions.

Saturday, December 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
calories, eyebrows and ex-boyfriends - the Jeopardy category is "Things we can use less of."
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2020

'I usually donate my old things to the less fortunate' - that's well said! The sarcasm is clear.

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David Wood 05 December 2020

A second poem of yours I've enjoyed. Life can be a series of misunderstanding with people making wrong conclusions. Check 2nd line of 2nd stanza.: -)

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 December 2020

This is good poetry. Very lively and life like.

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