Condiments - 2 Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Condiments - 2

Rating: 5.0


Found himself in
Such a pickle
Couldn't open
The goddam jar
Of sour pickles

Wednesday, May 18, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: tasting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Condiments Series is inspired by Geometric Butter by M.J. Lemon. Sincere thanks, M.J. for your continued inspiration.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice one. Humour enjoyed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 May 2022

The best is to open with a jar-opener,5 Stars and a greatest Bravo for this brilliant brevity. Thank you for sharing, Richard!

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But, Sylvia that takes the fun out of it. I use a flat knife to slightly pry it. I like 'brilliant brevity'. And I see a poem in the works. a

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 May 2022

Another wonderful short work

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Dillip, your poems on writing have filled my mind with wonderful ideas. And M.J. Lemon's inspired series is just one of many. I owe you a debt of gratitude!

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Richard Wlodarski 18 May 2022

Polish pickles are the best!

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In India it is "Police Pickles". If the Police take you in their custody, they pickle you.😀

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You are wrong, Richard. The pickles of Kerala, Tamil Nad and Andhra are the best. Of all these, Andhra pickles are the bestest. I don't blame you, for you have tasted them! Hot and sour. Sour and hot. Yummy…

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