Confessions Of Urmila 11 - The Journey Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Confessions Of Urmila 11 - The Journey

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It was just Lakshaman and me in the chariot
our charioteer was a skilled old man
Lakshman explained to me the towns, cities
even the trees and flowers on the way.

We had to cross the dense forest en route,
sensing no fear on my face, he asked
"are you not scared? wild animals do not
follow your rules when they attack" he joked.

"Why fear, with Ram who cleared
Thadakavanam of the demons, leading us
and his fierce brother Lakshman by my side? "
"but I'd love to test your swordsmanship" he joked again.

I had not known that Soumitri had hidden
a romantic heart behind his serious face,
I enjoyed every moment with him
in the new turn of my life. I was happy.

Whenever we stopped on our way,
the queens, the Maharaja and Ram
came to our chariot enquiring of
our comfort and gave directions to the suuta.

In those alien terrains, I felt secure
as I was in the palaces of Mithila.

Sunday, December 1, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,brother,cities,epic,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.J. Lemon 12 December 2024

I am reading this fantastic series, now waiting to see how each chapter unfolds. Brilliant, Unnikrishnan!

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Urmila's story is one of total betrayal and denigration, dear poet. Which, women were subjected to in olden days. And maybe, are even today.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 December 2024

I very much enjoyed this interesting tale about a pleasant ride and conversation. Thanks for sharing.

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I am sure, you would enjoy the story of Urmila. Thank you Evelyn

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 December 2024

A very engaging and interesting story. Beautiful series! I will have to read all these series to fully enjoy this spellbinding story. Thank you for sharing. A favorite.

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Urmila's story is one that has been swept under the carpets by all the story-tellers who told and retold the story of Ramayanam. Because all of them were men. Thank you, Rose Marie. Please read on….

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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