Confinement Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Confinement

Rating: 5.0


Let's exchange some tales and jokes
And open a door of lime-green world
Liberate your welcoming eyes
I want to glimpse the entrance of heaven.

When you're near
I can't explain what's going on inside
How can I declare
you're more than moon in my sky?

I play, rewind and play yesterdays
like a cassette
Feel you full-time
I'm confined in your cell like sim card.


Poem 06
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

Monday, May 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 05 October 2008

Contemporary romance, but as timeless as love itself. Fantastic imagery. Ten without question. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Pacific Hernandez 30 September 2008

A love poem nicely written.10 for this.

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Tsira Goge 29 September 2008

well...10... Tsira

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Mthokozisi Ntokozo 28 September 2008

I THINK YOUR POETIC LISNCE IS NOW PAYING OFF. YOUA ARE MORE THAN JUST A POET: BUT A FRIEND WHO IS CREATING MUSIC SOUNDBITS ONLINE. WE LOVE YOU LIKE KISSES. WE LIKE TO SAY MNCWA TO YOU. lOVELY LOVELY LOVELY; YOUARE SO LOVELY, DOES ANYONE EVER SAY THESE WORDS TO YOU.

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Gargi Saha 26 September 2008

WELL WRITTEN. u get 10++ Thanks for your nice comment on my poem My Balloon.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 June 2009

the first paregraph is worth repeating.10

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What a lovely confinement...... i love it... great ideas.....10

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Smiley Hooker 27 May 2009

this is a very natural poem of love in a cyber age and it could happen to anyone, anytime. beautiful! 10 smiles for you, sir!

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 16 May 2009

You have created a totally different style here, your own. Its interesting to read and enoyable.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 November 2008

A very interesting, delightful and different romantic poem. Good work! Loyd

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