Sally Plumb Plumb

Silver Star - 3,654 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Confused? - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Some kids in a playground
playing the round
of your dad is my dad...
suddenly found
that their dad
was her dad,
but..
she made no sound
because her dad
was his dad
who was playing a round
with more kids
that were his...

he was renowned
all over town.


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Sally Plumb

Comments about Confused? by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • Vipins Puthooran (9/29/2012 4:23:00 AM)


    amazin', really beautifulllll! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/20/2012 4:20:00 AM)


    Not so confused-we are all one big happy (?) family, right? (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (9/15/2012 4:00:00 AM)


    Like your title..it is confused.
    I am hunger to know who he is! !
    really interesting poem...keep it up fri
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  • Saadat Tahir (9/13/2012 8:24:00 AM)


    this pervasive blight of the single parent...and fractured family unit...portrayed with some emotion and exasperation.

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  • Heather Wilson (8/18/2012 6:19:00 AM)


    A thoughtful write, so many children have mum and dad living apart, some must be very confused. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/17/2012 1:46:00 PM)


    Brilliant one Sally - I'm definitely confused but not surprised - it's the way of the world these days! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/15/2012 4:21:00 AM)


    so mysterious and amazing one.! the title should exactly be that.he he...Confused..! i think that question mark should be removed, because it really is confused!
    Really fine and Good
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 15, 2012


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