In a mist I could hardly see my hands
Touched someone standing nearby
The feel was gentle like foam
I continued the touch
It suddenly started to shift its place
As if wanted to carry me somewhere
I followed unconditionally to his command
Without realizing where I am going
And where do I stand
I slipped from the top like a tumbling rock
To touch the bottom with faint
When got up I realized it was the life
It took me from dreams to the lights of reality.
An amazing poem on life swimming in the waves of dream to the island of reality...................10
some times dreams are more enjoyable than real life, i also like to stay more time in dreaming, well penned poem, thanks for sharing.
Fine reading.. I followed unconditionally to his command Without realizing where I am going And where do I stand I slipped from the top like a tumbling rock To touch the bottom with faint When got up I realized it was the life It took me from dreams to the lights of reality.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fall from dreams to the realities of life is a fall from a steep rock to the bottom! It will definitely jolt one out of all illusions! Very wisely put!