M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Conscience - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In a mist I could hardly see my hands
Touched someone standing nearby
The feel was gentle like foam
I continued the touch
It suddenly started to shift its place
As if wanted to carry me somewhere
I followed unconditionally to his command
Without realizing where I am going
And where do I stand
I slipped from the top like a tumbling rock
To touch the bottom with faint
When got up I realized it was the life
It took me from dreams to the lights of reality.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Conscience by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (11/17/2015 9:18:00 PM)


    A fall from dreams to the realities of life is a fall from a steep rock to the bottom! It will definitely jolt one out of all illusions! Very wisely put! (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/16/2015 8:06:00 PM)


    An amazing poem on life swimming in the waves of dream to the island of reality...................10 (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/16/2015 8:59:00 AM)


    some times dreams are more enjoyable than real life, i also like to stay more time in dreaming, well penned poem, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2015 8:49:00 AM)


    Fine reading..
    I followed unconditionally to his command
    Without realizing where I am going
    And where do I stand
    I slipped from the top like a tumbling rock
    To touch the bottom with faint
    When got up I realized it was the life
    It took me from dreams to the lights of reality.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015



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