Conscience Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Conscience

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In a mist I could hardly see my hands
Touched someone standing nearby
The feel was gentle like foam
I continued the touch
It suddenly started to shift its place
As if wanted to carry me somewhere
I followed unconditionally to his command
Without realizing where I am going
And where do I stand
I slipped from the top like a tumbling rock
To touch the bottom with faint
When got up I realized it was the life
It took me from dreams to the lights of reality.

Monday, November 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 17 November 2015

A fall from dreams to the realities of life is a fall from a steep rock to the bottom! It will definitely jolt one out of all illusions! Very wisely put!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 November 2015

An amazing poem on life swimming in the waves of dream to the island of reality...................10

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Shakil Ahmed 16 November 2015

some times dreams are more enjoyable than real life, i also like to stay more time in dreaming, well penned poem, thanks for sharing.

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Darren Jkoeryo 16 November 2015

Fine reading.. I followed unconditionally to his command Without realizing where I am going And where do I stand I slipped from the top like a tumbling rock To touch the bottom with faint When got up I realized it was the life It took me from dreams to the lights of reality.

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