Consoling Heaven Poem by Richard Wlodarski
Consoling Heaven
In the groove
This lonely
Sinful night
Jesus there
Consoling
That part of
Me dying
Just 'cause I'm
I'm in Heaven
So many thanks, Dillip for your comments. And for all of your support and encouragement throughout the years!
Please write freely sans paying attention to punctuation marks or any inadvertent typos
Thank you, Dillip. That's not always been my style. I found the old style to be too constricting. Free verse works so very well for me. Especially with The Kerouac Project!
This Estable loves open criticism but forgets to provide constructive suggestions
Dillip, I'm always open to constructive criticism which encompasses both positive and negative. But when the critic is clearly not familiar with free verse, it's a little hard to swallow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 11:50:55 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I see several things with this, but I will mention just two. The night being sinful? How so here? The zero punctuation make it hard to see how the lines should be read or organized.