Cookie Jar Poem by Jacqui Broad

Cookie Jar



When the cookie jar is empty,
there's no need to look for more.
Why keep disappointing yourself,
when you know what you'll find?
When the cookie jar is empty,
you go out to buy you some more.
And make sure you please yourself,
when it's something new you find...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kara Towe 31 December 2011

So important to love yourself and to keep reaching for the highest star. Your poem is darling and also filled with great meaning. When things are bad we must continue to have hope, and while hoping do things for our selves that are good. Helping others is always a good thing too, because so many need help and by helping others we help ourselves to become better people, and can also better appreciate our lives. Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous piece. :)

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Harindhar Reddy 05 November 2011

I like the imaginary employed by the writer in the name of cookie jar. I like the deepness of the poems. An Amazing rhyme. You always tugs at the heart string by poems like things.10+++++++ and + some smiles :) :) :) :) 'When the cookie jar is empty, there's no need to look for more.'

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Marcus Mckinley 17 October 2011

have you tried looking in someone elses cookie jar? just a thought....

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