Final Goodbye Poem by Jacqui Broad
Final Goodbye
Bob Marley sings
'Don't worry about a thing,
'cause everything's gonna be all right.'
And it's true if you think through the night.
It rained and I saw your rainbow,
and in my heart I know
that everything's going to be okay,
and that I can look forward to every day.
You haven't left me, you're still by my side,
and I can cry now all the tears I hide.
I kept myself brave and strong,
but I can't keep it up for too long.
When I break down I want to be alone,
to think of you and all the things I've known.
I have to compartementalize things in my brain.
I must keep faith to stay strong and sane.
And I will, I promise I will,
but without you I have nill.
I only ever had my love to give,
and much more did I receive.
So the final goodbye must get written by hand,
if I want to make sense of things hard to understand.
My life is full, but my heart is empty,
when I had you, I had plenty.
So adios, my love, till we meet again.
This is my final goodbye, till then...
Oh Jacqui, This poem is beautiful my friend. It's filled with such raw emotion and saddened love, Once we have love, we never truly lose it, yet its tested with death, love shall over come in the end. Phenomenal Write. :)
Emptiness, but still feeling the spirit, Bitterness but somehow everything will be all right Sweet memories will remain The spirit lives on in what we do. A very well written poem Jacqui, stirring the emotions and memories of the reader.
Jack, Jacqui, Jacqueline, Jacqueline Broad, Though gloomy you are yet you did not loose your phenomenal touch of writing poetry. Bravo! The poem left mark on my heart. I can see how tears welled from your eyes when I read these lines....... 'You haven't left me, you're still by my side, and I can cry now all the tears I hide.' By Jove! Oh my African Dove! Lo! Lo! I am sending Indian White (Pure) Dove to share your grief.... Hey Jacqui, My heart is throbbing and You robbed my heart! are you a sweet thief? Ha! Ha! Ha! :) :) :) :)
It really pain and it hard to let go word for all people when there was good time shared with...Sometime we can predict what people need from us, i mean they come and go and we still here going nowhere...The thing that end of every beautiful moment is only by this word, a goodbye...it teach me when i wanna say goodbye for all...but then i think will i forget that things i have built, all the hopes i want to see in them...to watch the best life they will have...to help when they in need, so i burn my goodbye..well you poem kinda remind me something...Keep your words fresh like always J! :) _Unwritten Soul
I told you, its all going to be fine, time heals it healed many deep scars and it is deffinately going to heal yours, the fact that you have the guts and ability to write about the pain, means a lot to your soul and your spirit conseptuality, soon! And very sooin! Lady Broad you gona be referring to this as history, remember! keep in mind that as you smile, you making him smile too.
Wow! Jacqui, what did i tell you about making other children cry? ? i saw Shadow G and Crim wiping tears, , , lol..i heard Jinal, Hans, Eric and Dave say 'mmmhh'....lol..Harindahr just went outside and i saw him chasing the white doves for you...lol! ! ! guys i just love you all, , , great piece Jacqueline..
Love never dies, its immortal... You shook the feelings.... there's a tide... a big wave of feelings... which has take a leap.. Take care my sweet friend, God Bless You(Amen)
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:36:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A great poem, a lot of love and emotion. So sorry for your loss.