a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
enchanting my eyes,
basking in its beauty
while in my view
my companion she will be
until I arrive at my destination
then her loneliness will prevail
mockingly,
in parallel to mine
I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one. GW62
Seeing the moon as a companion - so close yet so far - is an incredible metaphor. A beautiful poem that touches the core of the readers' heart. Thank you for penning down such wonderful lines..
The moon is personified as a companion to a lonely traveler who does not feel alone anymore, I like the style employed here awesome.
Very nice. A moon is a better companion at night. Liked it.
Well written, Anna. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this....