Cool Moon Traveling Poem by Anna Pacheco

Cool Moon Traveling

Rating: 3.1


a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
enchanting my eyes,
basking in its beauty

while in my view
my companion she will be
until I arrive at my destination
then her loneliness will prevail
mockingly,
in parallel to mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Richter 13 August 2015

I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this....

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one. GW62

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 December 2015

A companion is needed in life. Nice work.

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Souren Mondal 01 December 2015

Seeing the moon as a companion - so close yet so far - is an incredible metaphor. A beautiful poem that touches the core of the readers' heart. Thank you for penning down such wonderful lines..

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Kinyua Karanja 01 December 2015

The moon is personified as a companion to a lonely traveler who does not feel alone anymore, I like the style employed here awesome.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 December 2015

Very nice. A moon is a better companion at night. Liked it.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2015

Well written, Anna. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!

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Driss Ezzireg 01 December 2015

Nice poem.Elements of nature are always a comfort.

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John Richter 01 December 2015

So happy to read this again Anna....

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M Asim Nehal 01 December 2015

Great metaphor and nice imagery in your poem....

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