The truth is half and reversal half
the futile and useless stuff
which pulls man on defensive
and makes him justify him self to strive
the dangerous action
it wounds man`s precious station
and hurts sense of importance
also arouses his resentment face
criticism is dangerous spark
which causes an explosion, pride killer`s park
never to be accepted
hence the creator will be hated
God him self sir does not propose to judge a man until the end of his days so why should we, you and I?
A good subject which needs more work on the spelling and grammer. Do you mean 'Criticism'? ie Pertaining to censure. A worthy subject.
Thought prvoking whether to accept criticism or not....good thinking
An ‘even’ mind can only accept criticism and praise in similar way. Poet has enumerated nicely the dark zones of not accepting criticism as morale. Thanks for stirring my grey cells. Ten+ dr. sakti
criticism is dangerous spark which causes an explosion, pride killer`s park never to be accepted hence the creator will be hated no resentment and self criticism is best one. it gives u solace from your own action.. best write dear..i admire it....10 read mine friend in mirror.. i am disgrace and individual an stupidity
you hit the point in an accurate manner - I like the end- I give you...8
Yes luwi... I wholeheartedly support ur contention.. Messy folks should just go about their life.... and let people be but unfortunately...this world with its increasingly...filled in...dimensions and entropy....wo0nt let u be ur anger and exaspiration moves swift through tyhe lines.. very welll written cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'crisitism is dangerous spark which causes an explosion, pride killer`s park never to be accepted hence the creator will be hated' Beautiful poem with nice ending. I love the idea.10+++