sparkling dew cries over blade of grass
redeeming slowly by rays golden
mystery shrouds over green of garden
as dawn remembers art of last night
query riffles by nature of resonance
precision happens to happen by bliss
sweetness refluxes by newness of world
soul awes by eclectic cry of innocence
joy resounds mingling into spumes in void
quest lays back into eternity by askance
is there love lost to reason of murky ravine?
as beauty of grace reels up by dreams onshore
soul knows truth of trust by reason implicit
greenness smooches by eyes of grin surmised
heart yet needs warmth of love by craving
moment when chilled by snow in indulgence
yet moment makes history in ages and eons
embracing breaths of love and hatred entwined
into the furrows of days and night intemperate
still we smacks of love resolute in adherence
gleans of love streams in as yet not hurt! !
enlighten soul by divine glory of love sanguine
as quest dies then there by the rain sizzling
like bubbles of queries mingling into obscurity.
Sincere flow of candid thoughts undeniably founded in profound wisdom being a poet you have surmised the truth has expressed the intuition of the human mind every sentiment quite real and explicitly written none else so ardent and instinctively clever doing poetry with much passion and zeal until the end of time please do share
Ooooh! I just loved this your wizdom on your point of view in your thought is amazing! The exampled cresents of which you right shows that we all see things in unique and seperate. If we didn't we would never have grand write though or conversation. If we all see it the same only one of us can really see. The leader on this Earth know this I am not talking about the Pharoah or the president or the Emporer. I am talking about those that understand and listen where listening is needed and talking when talking is needed. You show the mind of all of us perfection. Yet another for the favorites in my collection of loved poems. Zachary Clark,
Its how you painted the nature in your own words, superb its excellent! Go on writing its like pleasure reading your poems.
Great poem, love the use of words, i have some more poetry posted, please read when you have time, thanks
VERy well written this is such a beautiful poem couldn't help of writting a comment when i read this.. excellent us of words *.*
i completely enjoyed this poem decisional in between natural beauties and nature related changes......i hope you will go on with
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
I Loved This Poem... The Beauty of the Words brings Sublime Imagery... I like the way you speak it, Tell its own Story - Nature, Time, Love, etc.... MoonBee
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The sun rises each day on a different world, changes happen constantly; there is a lot of beauty in your poem, you are so right dawns tear do sparkle in the change from night to day. I like the Cry of Innocence...it pictures natural life quite beautifully. Thank you