Cue To Mutiny Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Cue To Mutiny

Rating: 3.9


A gloved hand,
Outstretched, awaits
Mine to clasp
Around it as
It's owner's
Smile captures his
Confidence in my answer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You fleck a painting grandeur, with literary pinachey, and in a mere 20 words..Not an easy feat, however you bring it on home...Simpatico! ~FjR~

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John Raubenheimer 24 August 2012

Yes. the title tells us what's really going on. The hand might open to clasp yours but it wears a glove, has a hidden motive. The smile I would say, is more of a smirk.

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Kevin Patrick 20 August 2012

I find this very vague and mystifying but in a good way, it expresses so much with so few words leaving me wanting to read it again and again. Is it about a girl who falls for a boy who she doesn’t want to but finds herself hopelessly under his sway? Since love is a language I find difficult to speak I can only make a simple translation but a sterling read

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Savita Tyagi 17 August 2012

Well done with so few words.

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Fonia Tan 15 July 2012

The poem is nice but i think it needs more development. There's still a lot to write and describe, its a pity that it ended so shortly. You can add some more metaphors, or maybe associate it with something else. =D

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Chyna Parker 14 July 2012

This is by far my favorite! I read all the ones you suggested but I picked out one my own and wow! The way you split the lines are very interestingly done. Great job! 10/10 Made me reread it a few times to get the full message. The title itself is lovely! Well done :)

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