I just can't take it...
My heart is racing.
Emotions keep spinning out.
I can't stop stuttering.
My lungs are refusing to work.
My brain is overwhelmed.
Your image is burned into my eyes.
Everything suddenly seems to be 10 times more amazing and has a new light to it.
It's as if a veil that was covering the good in the world was lifted..
By you.
Your name is constantly flowing from my tongue.
My thoughts are erratic and jumbled.
...And I love every minute of it. 3
Beauty, clearly radiates through this fantastic write that astoundingly move me! The very essence of Poetry has touched you wonderfully! 10+++ well deserved! Keep it up! This is just the beginning for you and it already tastes good! Keep it up! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Love and Peace for always! Rome from NYC....
Sounds like puppy love! How sweet! ! [3
Wonderful, great expression of deep and powerful emotions! Great write keep up the good work!
I love the flow of words. It's sure a really good piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love this poem it is really good. keep writing! ! ! :) -Amber