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Dr subhendu kar
Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
Tuesday, January 13, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *curve Of Mystery*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.3
CURVE OF MYSTERY

Day and night flow by the nature
seasons follow one after another
snow falls dazzling by brightness
do they have any quest and query.?

rain and thunder, may restrain the light
as black shadow curtains glaze and glow
all when freaks of wonder by mysterious universe.
are love and hatred the curves of psychic clouds? .

grin of the green never ruffles along cornfield
dream goes on galloping unto the goal won
as hope saddles strength by mighty desire
patience wades through crunching mysteries.

creativity blooms only through freedom..
look at an orchid and its color bewitching
florence of fragrance expends into air
as reality wakes us from deep slumber.
Dr subhendu kar
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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
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Mona Martinez 10 November 2009
rain and thunder, may restrain the light as black shadow curtains glaze and glow all when freaks of wonder by mysterious universe. are love and hatred the curves of psychic clouds? for some reason i love this part. so creately put together.
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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009
A mature poetry... Shows your great sense of humour.....10
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Nolan Trenton 14 October 2009
Thought provoking piece, very nice flow of words..........10
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Lakshmi Venkataraman 18 September 2009
Amazing write! deep thoughts given well worked with nature way to go doc.! !
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Reshma Ramesh 10 September 2009
beautiful......well done
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 08 September 2009
an amaziiiiiiing mystery! you have chosen the suitable words for MYSTERY. I enjoyed it!
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Seema Joglekar 22 August 2009
On1st reading was hit by a gust of wind, The impact striking me ill, Your parables and symbols, hurled with a compact vengeance-do take the kill. Was'nt poetry to be free-flowing, singing, unflurling, lucid and not a conflict raising curdle, Very laboured phrases, contrived epithets, grammatic imprecision the true meaning- turned to a riddle.[Sorry-Entirely my thoughts, Keep up the good work]
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Majida Abdul Latif 14 July 2009
I love thsi poem it made me feel like i am in another world. A wonderful one. Its amazing piece.
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Ejaz Khan 11 June 2009
A thought provoking write, where you've used so many parables and symbols. In the world of poetry everything is allowed, no need to worry much about the trivialities, the reader is often forgiving, just enjoying the essence, the nectre of your beautiful thoughts. Regards
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