Dagger Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Dagger

Rating: 5.0


Insert deep into my heart
Let the blood clot inside
This knife is meant for that
It is a gift from my sweetheart

When I was with her
She screwed me with beautiful words
Now before leaving me alone
She presented me this dingdong

I am hanging it since then
Unable to take it away, instant
The last footprints on my heart
Has left an image so dark

This blood keeps reminding me of her
Better if someone with broken heart insert
This dagger deep and deeper
So that he will be happy and I will live forever.

Tuesday, January 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,love and life,philosophy,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2016

Superb... I am hanging it since then Unable to take it away, instant The last footprints on my heart Has left an image so dark

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2016

Wowww. What an amazing depiction of love and betrayal. And the use of dagger as a symbol of pain is remarkably appropriate. Indeed, every loss and deceit hurts us like a dagger. Deserving no less than 10.

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Kelly Kurt 05 January 2016

Amazing poem, Mohammed. None can hurt deeper than those we love. A 10+

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