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Daisies Don’t Lie

Rating: 4.7

A peaceful rainbow
painted with our colourful memories,
butterflies around us
dancing tango with the wind
and a lonely ladybug
is travelling on my palm
singing a Spring’s hymn.
There are no clouds in the sky,
They were chased by a hunter,
Called sun.
Today is Our day,
We are hiding from the rest of the world
And the last petal of a daisy
Says that you love me
And I believe it…

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelley B. Keats 11 October 2005

nicely done...the ladybug with a hymn stands out... the concluding lines are very vivid as well...

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Velvet Thorn 23 September 2005

Your images are very vivid, I liked this one a lot.-VT

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Georgios Venetopoulos 22 January 2013

I believe it too. Very tender poem. Thank you for it.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 22 January 2013

I tried to find that ladybug, but it was not possible. So we 'll wait for her to come back in Spring, maybe. The poem is tender and beautiful. Brought smiles on my face.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 22 January 2013

I believe it too. Very elegant poem.

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Esther Leclerc 21 February 2006

You have captured my exact emotions on a day such as this... and I agree, daisies don't lie. Thank you!

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Duncan Wyllie 20 February 2006

Nestled in this tranquil place the warmth washes over me like a gentle stream of love.Wanted to stay here much longer.God Bless.Love Duncan

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