David Wood

Gold Star - 13,793 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Damn Noise (Cinquain) - Poem by David Wood

Wind chimes
Dance in the breeze
But after a short while
The bloody things get on my nerves
Damn noise

Topic(s) of this poem: wind

Form: Cinquain

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Cinquain 2-4-6-8-2 syllables

Comments about Damn Noise (Cinquain) by David Wood

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/5/2015 11:14:00 PM)

    Wonderful depiction.
    A beautiful poem that touches the heart. Thanks for sharing. ......10
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  • Kelly Kurt (9/5/2015 4:30:00 PM)

    Most people, I'm sure, can relate. Even Chopin gets old after long enough.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (9/5/2015 3:56:00 PM)

    Well written! I've never owned wind chimes, have thought maybe I would like some, but now... I'm not so sure! (Report) Reply

  • (9/5/2015 2:39:00 PM)

    Good Show!
    After a while, I hate the bloody noise too.
    Excellent poetic British humor
    Thank you, so well written!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2015

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