Sarah Ibrahim

Rookie - 10 Points (18/11/1984 / Riyadh)

Dark Room - Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Tossing and turning in my bed
Thousand thoughts conquering my head

Things doesn't feel right anymore
Lots of things changed from before

Opened my heart with caution not to get hurt
Suddenly all my feelings got under the Dirt

I've been told Life is River that keeps on Rolling
But somewhere along the way i missed the Calling

Stumbling not wanting to fall
While I'm crossing darkness hall

No longer sure where to put my steps
While every Drop of courage within me slips

Lost the light of the flickering candle
Nothing around seems easy to handle

Standing in the middle of darkened room
Held to the floor with chains of gloom

Frozen. Unable to cry
As I lose it all in a Dark room
Under a moonless Sky

Sarah Ibrahim ©


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  • Rania H (2/23/2012 3:51:00 PM)

    Frozen. Unable to cry
    As I lose it all in a Dark room
    Under a moonless Sky

    I loved that most
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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (4/20/2009 11:15:00 AM)

    walking dazed in the darkness, mind...well, a good expressive write, Sarah...light is always there at the end of the tunnel...HIS light...10 (Report)Reply

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  • tara star (4/13/2009 3:32:00 PM)

    True...but somtimes we get observed in darkness tht we ignore the light tht is ready to brighten our life, , , , thts why we should never lose hope no matter how tough is our life our faith and trust on Allah turn dark nights in to bright days..
    overall very nice composition..keep it up....! i liked it
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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (1/9/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    Sometimes life becomes a dark room, a nightmare... but there is always a way out, always a door is lit up...! (Report)Reply

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  • Liu-ai Thu Sheba (10/15/2008 3:41:00 PM)

    very well described and theatrical (Report)Reply

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  • Aijaz Asif (10/5/2008 7:28:00 PM)

    a very beautiful composition indeed with deep feelings of loneliness and lost....thanks 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/1/2008 1:37:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, amazing composition.
    10+ for it.
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  • Mehmet YILMAZLAR (9/2/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    very goodd ; well down and rhytmic (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (6/29/2008 5:05:00 AM)

    Nice poem it is
    chosen words has brought fine tempo!
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (6/17/2008 3:16:00 AM)

    'Lost the light of the flickering candle
    Nothing around seems easy to handle'well done, thanks for sharing
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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (6/16/2008 11:51:00 PM)

    good poem i like it.......... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 15, 2009


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