Dark Southern Skies Poem by Eric Cockrell

Dark Southern Skies

Rating: 4.0


faded sign falling down
from an abandoned mill
mailboxes full of
unopened bills
houses with no curtains
old cars up on blocks
all the stores are empty
all the doors are locked

dark southern skies
no one's home anymore
no one hears the cry
no one sweeps the floor
man without work
his woman turns away
dark southern skies
and there's no one left to pray...

empty crib gathers dust
a Bible by the bed
workboots in the corner
with this ring i thee wed
pictures on the wall
dont answer in the night
and empty still looks empty
in the morning light

dark southern skies
no one's home anymore
no one hears the cry
no one sweeps the floor
man without work
his woman turns away
dark southern skies
there's no one left to pray....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nik Morgan 29 June 2011

Very nice piece you capture the mood well thanks Nik

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill. The poem is highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A diabolic act, rape' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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