Dark Truths 04 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Dark Truths 04

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Dreams are mere dreams
Like waves on the oceans
Amorphous water.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 09 June 2020

Oh My Word. This is huge for such a little poem! ! ! Lovely Lovely Lovely! ! ! ! You are a Haiku Master! ! ! This goes on my Favorite List and I want to give it a million stars to represent the tens it deserves! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 June 2020

Wow! Thank you, Susie for this most encouraging words. I am no master of any type of poetry. Haiku is a wonderful form of poetry, definitely. I just tried to encapsulate this idea in the format. Your marvellous comment makes me proud that I have done justice to this form of poetry. Once again, thank you, my dear.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 August 2019

A powerful three liner poem. A poem of great depth.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 August 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, for your profound analysis of this little poem

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Savita Tyagi 08 December 2018

One must dream with eyes open! Nice profound poems poems about dark truth. Thank you for visiting my page.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2018

Very true, Savita. World is a Lethe of darkness. Where do we look for a tiny drop of light that can take us through it? And dreams? Made of amorphous nothingness. Never materialised. Murphy’s Laws rule our lives

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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