Darkness (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Darkness (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


No stars in the sky
Moon hidden by dark grey clouds
Heavens mourn quake victims

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anand Madhukar 13 October 2009

Nature sharing in the sorrow of human beings...Lovely expressions.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 October 2009

This senryu is a sad tribute to earthquake victims. It reminded me the earthquake of Oct.8,2005.

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Bob Blackwell 04 October 2009

Your words are so true for so many people today. Wonderful read

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 October 2009

A true senryu, true to its purpose. Wonderful and touching.

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Yelena M. 02 October 2009

everything is said in these three lines..you can express a strong emotion in few words like no one else. thanks for sharing, Sandra. Yelena M.

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Raj Nandy 16 October 2009

A TOUCHING TRIBUTE TO THE QUAKE VICTIMS! 10! -Raj

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Sonya Florentino 15 October 2009

of course, they too mourn....everyone...everything mourns! !

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Mamta Agarwal 15 October 2009

nature too mourns... Mamta

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Patti Masterman 14 October 2009

The things of darkness always more unpalatable than those of the light. I like how even the stars must run away, at the hideous sights and sounds.

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Alison Cassidy 13 October 2009

Your powerful words could equally apply to the darkness (like night) described by those who suffered death and homelessness in last February's wild fires in Victoria. It would seem that nature's wrath can be felt in a myriad of guises all over the planet. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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