Date, Graduate! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Date, Graduate!

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The dancing sea!
Sweating is part of life;
Young ladies,
Moving on with their steps,
In this act of dance.

Open your eyes and see beyond your mind! !
The 'comma' makes the difference;
Be, beyond!
The 'full stop' makes the difference;
The dancing sea!
The 'punctuation' makes the difference;
Captued with love,
Young ladies with their dancing steps.

Touches! !
With the muse of love;
The 'apostrophe' makes the difference,
Watch their eyes,
And you will see the muse of a culture being displayed.

Aid, maid!
To hold tight to the works of the land;
With the custom of the people,
With the muse of the dancing sea.

Aids, maids!
Under 21;
With positve moral characters needed to change their bodies,
Dancing along,
To repsect their culture.

Date, graduate!
Under the arms of the law;
Presenting themselves for the show,
Merciful and real! !
Wih applause from the onlookers.

Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: aid,aids,culture,dancing,girls,graduation,images,inspired,maid,show
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 30 August 2016

This is a strong piece. very much enjoyed the read... Annette

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 30 August 2016

So exotic one's culture different from mine.

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Unwritten Soul 30 August 2016

The rhyme, wordings and messages...such a combo good things

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