Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 93,715 Points (1978 / India)

Daunting Task - Poem by Rini Shibu

The light from a pinhole
When the room is dark
enough to overcome the daunting task
Step forward and follow the ray
Till you reach the sunny day

Topic(s) of this poem: overcoming


Comments about Daunting Task by Rini Shibu

  • (4/21/2018 12:07:00 AM)

    Hi Rini
    Wonderful!

    Just follow the ray and you have a sunny day! Very positive outlook.
    Your positivity is contagious. Thank you.
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    Rini Shibu(4/21/2018 12:21:00 AM)

    Thanks for visiting and posting your feedback

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/20/2018 11:33:00 AM)

    So lovely, so precise, so briefly you said a ton, Rini!
    Loved your approach.
    10+++++++++++
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    (4/20/2018 11:12:00 PM)

    Thanks Subhas, glad that you like it

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  • (4/20/2018 5:53:00 AM)

    Great poem with great advice to follow. (Report)Reply

    (4/20/2018 11:11:00 PM)

    Thanks Lamar for your compliments

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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/20/2018 2:15:00 AM)

    Rini, a poem of precision. (Report)Reply

    (4/20/2018 11:10:00 PM)

    Thanks, glad to read your comment

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/20/2018 1:25:00 AM)

    Dear friend Rini, such an inspiring poem worthy to mark with a 10+++++ (Report)Reply

    (4/20/2018 11:09:00 PM)

    Thanks Bernard, glad that you visiting

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 20, 2018



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