from "While Passing Through"/Summer
Dawn. Thunder mumbles—
in bed still, a fan whirring—
my heart hears "promise."
A great appealing poem of hope through imagery and weather. The promise of summer wow poetic! Kudos! Pls pleez do review/comment my newest poem too titled, " the Hajj pilgrimage "
thank you for reading my poem and your strong affirmation. i appreciate. i'll take a look at your poem. blessings! -glen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You capture the different sounds at dawn. Sometimes when I awake, I think heavy rain is falling, but it is my dehumidifier, I realize after a short time. There is indeed promise at the dawn.
where i live here in albuquerque, new mexico, michael, it's high desert. in a typical decent year we get 8-9 inches of rain, and usually most of it in summer, our monsoon season. so far it's been drier than we like. there's still lots of summer left, and i'm hoping. thanks for the comment. -glen