Vinod Kumar

Rookie - 6 Points (kannur-kerala-India)

Day And Night Only - Poem by Vinod Kumar

The Young Couple
The small thatched house
The green front fields
The cool small stream

They slept in the night blanket
They woke up with birds
The sun lead to the field
The moon guard their nights

Only days are gone
Only nights are gone
Joyful days and nights
Brought them lots of children

They marked the lands
They scratched the walls
Days are become Weeks
Then Month, Year, Era

Day devided hours
Minuts and seconds
Then the cracy children
Divide more to nano

They lost the day
They lost the night
They can`t find
The beauty of day and night

Comments about Day And Night Only by Vinod Kumar

  • Elena Sandu (8/2/2011 1:01:00 AM)

    I needed to read this again.. my feelings are that you might refer to the simple life humans had before, as time runs, civilization, science advance but to the detriment of ' US '. Then we have to work so much that we forget the meaning of day and night.. we loose the happy days and nights that you described at the start of this lovely poem. Could we call this progress? ! ? hmm...
    Thank you for share,10
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  • (7/30/2011 10:10:00 AM)

    Indian life is realistically pictured here. Life looks glamorous in the beginning years but gradually becomes pale and mechanical as the whole day one has to struggle to earn his livelihood.Nice theme.I give 10++++ for this. (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2010 11:38:00 AM)

    A good poem I second Poet Sandra’s comments
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (7/4/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    nice write indeed sir.. liked it very much...
    great one to relax my mind from all the complications of modern world and ahhh! ! YES the studies. thanks for this one
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2009 4:17:00 AM)

    They lost the day
    They lost the night
    They can`t find
    The only day and the endless plight and life cycle goes on. if leasurely used then ur luck or spent aimlessly then also your luck....but once lost can't be recovered. beautifully interwoven.....10
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  • (6/4/2009 9:37:00 AM)

    a beautifull leisurely life it was once.beautifully told. posted 10
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  • (4/11/2009 12:21:00 PM)

    Very nice. That is the cycle of life, some days are lost. (Report) Reply

  • (2/27/2009 7:06:00 AM)

    Very poignant. Life is a mixture of sunshine and sorrow.10, for you.

    Warm regards,

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  • (2/24/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    i like the flow of words in this nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    i loved it (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    Exiquisite expression! Great! (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (12/27/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    you have your way of words, so lovely and gentle to read. Nice work! (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2008 8:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful poems, well written...10 for this...
    Thanks for the kind commen...
    Best wishes,
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  • Raj Arumugam (12/23/2008 2:45:00 AM)

    a good vision of life
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  • (12/20/2008 9:00:00 AM)

    well versed and good deliverance about life..good write..

    Ency Bearis
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  • (12/16/2008 3:00:00 PM)

    yes it reality of the life, enjoye us by writin this lovely poems (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    Reality of Life..
    Well done!
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  • (12/16/2008 2:58:00 AM)

    Agreat write Vinoduk...well done you...thanks for sharing this and a merry Christmas to you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 13, 2011

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