</>Fire is crying with
Simple voice
In the black smith`s yard
With red crop cutter
Fire is crying with
The Farmer`s lip
And the burning cigar
With the empty stomach
Fire is crying with
The the roof top and the mother
Beside laid the silent son
With the red eye
Fire is crying with
The Launching base
And the scientist`s brain
With the Rocket sky
Fire is Laughing with
The smiling lips of you
Round the clock
with Blessing joy and cool.
Extraordinary imagery. Reminds me of the fine Chinese poets I read with such pleasure in, 'The World Poets Quarterly'.. Kindest regards, Sandra
nice poem...... especially i like the last para.... simple and fire in poem........ 10
your poetic imaginations fire the readers down, Vinod...each stanza holds a seperate image unique and good...10
The flames of tears are burning liquid fire. Well done my friend.
great personification sir... well come to think of it. fire is very lively thing indeed! ! ! .. this is very different poem and nice poem indeed..10+ with love shan
Fire is Laughing with The smiling lips Round the clock with Blessing joy and cool........ beautiful write with eye catching imagination... fire is sour of power and we owe complete existence... what a deep thinking and carefull wording... i loved it....10
fire is essence of life with so many functions.nice. posted 10 love®ards surya
Fire is a great theme and love the extremes you have created with your excellent imagery. Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent write vinu...enjoyed the read...thank you...Fi...10++