Jayatissa Liyanage

Gold Star - 35,534 Points (21st June / Walasmulla, Sri Lanka)

Day In Day Out....... - Poem by Jayatissa Liyanage

Sun, nonchalantly, makes
plants grow, buds open
flowers bloom, fruits ripe,
zephyrs twirl, rain-bows glow
deer cubs toss, butterflies flap
and a host of happenings
one after the other in chain!
On the lap of mother earth
Poets sitting down submissively,
counting on, write down mounds of lines,
Making every event, like, their own,
adding bits of decors and sweeteners

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Inspired by Valsa George’s “A November Morning” to pen these thoughts.

Comments about Day In Day Out....... by Jayatissa Liyanage

  • Hans Vr (12/11/2015 7:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem and reflection. (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (12/1/2015 2:38:00 AM)

    Nature is always sweet to look at and enjoy, and even to pen down poems on.. Thank you for sharing Jayatissa. It's a lovely poem :) (Report) Reply

    Jayatissa K. Liyanage (12/1/2015 9:57:00 AM)

    Thank you Souren for your encouraging comment.

  • Valsa George (11/15/2015 11:47:00 PM)

    I am so happy that my poem November Morning has inspired you to write this lovely poem on all that happens in Nature in day light and how they are made immortal by poets! A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/14/2015 10:39:00 AM)

    Valsa's poems can be inspiring. Very nicely done, Jayatissa (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/14/2015 10:16:00 AM)

    you have painted the activities of sun in poetic language, with beautiful words and images, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015

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