Dear Enemy Poem by Sunny Rose

Dear Enemy



It's a shame to my foolish heart
I tried to stop but couldn't i
And now so desparate
It has to thirst
In the immense blue
Let by the mislead wicked in her eyes
Dear enemy, i've lost to you
I surrender and now i'll die for you
I've been decieved by your such perfection
But by thy art i still, will trust you
Because it's our battle you'll never lose
Keep on breathing and let you not perish from my eyes
For i for life need you to survive

Thy smile is the sunshine
And my tears are the rain
The seed of sorrow will thrive to pain
But thou wait for none to cut it down
Except your impossible hands of non-enemity
But dear enemy, i am your enemy
For you can't love me so despise me
For i can't change your enemity
Despise me and let you be free

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i weeped just a little writing this so this has to be my fav poem of mine also i used some archaic words in some particular places thats for decoration and dn't call me gay for crying in ur comments below lol...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 10 February 2013

The title made me read this and truly you did a great job here..keep it up for new write and polish what you have and be sunnier rose haha_Soul

0 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 October 2012

A gr8 metaphorical poem! Hope u read mine too.

0 0 Reply
Aung Si 02 October 2012

I feel something deeply when I read this.But I can't express with words.Really sorrowful poem.The last two lines of first stanza are straight to my heart.I pay respect to u.Cheers......

0 0 Reply
Eindaray Kyaw 27 September 2012

Keep on breathing and let you not perish from my eyes....I enjoy this verse We won't call u gay :) don't worry :) Great job! !

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success