Death Poem by Arielle Friese

Death

Rating: 4.5


As my last breath comes
i await the kiss
the last kiss of u and me
the kiss of death
it kills
it burns
but how are you to know
you will never know
as i lie on the floor
slowly dying
wishing that i can see you one last time
but what do you care
your the reason for this
your the reason im dying
but you walk around with a smile
you watch in pity
then you pick up the knife
kiss it with your deadly lips
and stabs it through my heart
ur the one that killed me
ur tha one that never cared
now i shall haunt you 4 ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lavion Bell 30 January 2012

you life look like a puzzle that need to be solved

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Misses Unknown 30 January 2012

i love this poem well done keep up the good work

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Wahab Abdul 01 March 2012

a very beautiful poem, well composed, great piece of work, I like it……….keep sharing,

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very morbid. overall its a great poem tho arielle. Very nice job ^_^[3

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Deaire Taylor 09 February 2012

Wow.....all I can say is wow....this is GREAT...makes me wanna cry

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Unwritten Soul 07 February 2012

Arielle...it not worth to die or feel pain that someone who not appreciate you.. it's like when a flower dying because of a bee fly away...it never give impact to it, why dont keep bloom who knows there's butterfly and many bees to come and sing a long ..dont waste your life for useless reason, make your life richer and contentment with any reason! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Chidori Storm 31 January 2012

I feel that way right now about someone.....

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