Arielle Friese

Rookie (Florida)

I Believed You - Poem by Arielle Friese

I believed u loved me and i think u beleved it to
but then one day u tore my heart out
and broke it ripped it to pieces

I dont know where the pieces are
they have went everyehere now i jus t have to search
and while im searching my heart will keep bleeding
till i can fix it again


Comments about I Believed You by Arielle Friese

  • (6/9/2012 2:41:00 AM)


    ohh really an amazing poem....i loved it (Report) Reply

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  • (1/30/2012 8:20:00 AM)


    loved it real good love how you worded it (Report) Reply

  • Brianna Winebarger (1/26/2012 10:34:00 AM)


    A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic (Report) Reply

  • Brianna Winebarger (1/26/2012 10:34:00 AM)


    A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2012 10:08:00 AM)


    nice poem..........i like it (Report) Reply

  • (1/12/2012 3:56:00 AM)


    Wow, sure is very bleak (not a bad thing though(. Well written. (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 8:35:00 AM)


    really an interesting poem. great ideas in young age itself.........good work....... (Report) Reply

  • Naveen Kumar (12/27/2011 8:50:00 AM)


    Hearts are broken when some words are unspoken... you spoke your heart in your poem... hope you find a quick-fixer soon.. it was nice to read... keep up the good work: -) (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 7:11:00 PM)


    its more often the case.. that one heart loves the other more...it fixes..but i think will always hurt if it was true love... your pain is described and felt...my empathy is yours (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 11:15:00 AM)


    wow nice i like it keep it up: +) (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/24/2011 5:38:00 AM)


    We need transplant heart to be done :) Joking...it so heartfelt Arielle, good poem with true emotion, keep writing it has great touch :) ...Dont keep bleed soon you will lost blood, and if even you find back your heart but no blood, what your heart use for? ? ? think it deeply...Good luck! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Chidori Storm (12/24/2011 1:42:00 AM)


    Definitely a good poem. This one really describes your pain. Don't stop writing. Your poems are great. (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 1:24:00 AM)


    nice message in the poem :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 24, 2011


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