I Believed You Poem by Arielle Friese

I Believed You

Rating: 4.8


I believed u loved me and i think u beleved it to
but then one day u tore my heart out
and broke it ripped it to pieces

I dont know where the pieces are
they have went everyehere now i jus t have to search
and while im searching my heart will keep bleeding
till i can fix it again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John wake 24 December 2011

nice message in the poem :)

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Chidori Storm 24 December 2011

Definitely a good poem. This one really describes your pain. Don't stop writing. Your poems are great.

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Unwritten Soul 24 December 2011

We need transplant heart to be done :) Joking...it so heartfelt Arielle, good poem with true emotion, keep writing it has great touch :) ...Dont keep bleed soon you will lost blood, and if even you find back your heart but no blood, what your heart use for? ? ? think it deeply...Good luck! _Unwritten Soul

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Hope Anderson 24 December 2011

wow nice i like it keep it up: +)

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The 4am Poet Worm 26 December 2011

its more often the case.. that one heart loves the other more...it fixes..but i think will always hurt if it was true love... your pain is described and felt...my empathy is yours

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Rain ... 09 June 2012

ohh really an amazing poem....i loved it

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Lavion Bell 30 January 2012

loved it real good love how you worded it

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Brianna Winebarger 26 January 2012

A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic

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Brianna Winebarger 26 January 2012

A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic

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Dead Leaf 26 January 2012

nice poem..........i like it

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