Hello-Good Bye Poem by Arielle Friese

This is so good...i guess it's something that talk very detail even it was written in not too long...the expression just really cool..i feel real and yes it might be real from your heart, but your hand make it alive in poetry...nice one_Unwritten Soul

it's really a hurting poem but u need to understand that u don't allow every one to get in.....

Beautiful poem, embrace the hurt, it can only make you stronger.

Very heartfelt awesome write! (:

we all have those days where all gets questioned

You shouldn't believe that every man you meet will eventually leave you. This is a good poem. Don't stop writing.

i like this too, i relate

: '(how traumatic. good poem tho, great use of emotion.

Amazing! I really love this powerful write that clearly translates the outburst of your heart and at the same time shows your great poetic talent! You are very young, talented and strong! You will survive and I know that you will keep inspiring the World with more such poignant writes! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always!