Incredulous I.
Neither one appears to fear
yet so certain God is near
times trodden trail to make and mend
for that's the way all 's done my friend.
Barbaric still; now to what end?
Better banishment by far
cloistered then those souls disarmed
will abide in harmony.
November 2006
explosive write, .....the mental imagery is of brilliance..'10' best wishes Jon
whoa...really powerful...great one, i felt the hang man's noose, and your preference that punishment should be otherwise
Well put Gillian - we seem to be observing the the ways of the dark ages transported directly into the twenty first century -whatever happened to civilisation - perhaps it only exists in the imagination! Egal..
i like it alot... i fell this might have something to do with the saddam case but i dont know. it goes together well
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful imagery and composition.