' Death' (Loop Poem) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr
' Death' (Loop Poem)
Procreation is a gift
gift shared in marriage
Marriage is sacred
sacred defines life
Life is quite monumental
monumental as in special
Special thing being alive
alive to take adventure
Adventure is exploration
exploration for survival
Survival declares the fittest
fittest among others is finite
Finite is human life's span
span of living is unpredictable
Unpredictable is our existence
existence that soon shall vanish
Vanish shall become all of us
us as human succumbs to death
I like the structure of this poem best. I like your imagery, although I prefer they would be more brightly colored. You are so somber for one so young. Why is it?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 7:42:25 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I agree with Valerie's comment. Good write!