December Blues Poem by Darwin Henry Beuning

December Blues

Rating: 4.0


Looking out my bay window
On a cold Utah day,
Fresh snow covering the ground.

Thinking about December
And what it should mean,
A season of love,
A season of joy,
A celebration of life.

But, for many,
A season of pain,
Divorces here,
Divorces there,
Divorces everywhere,
Shattered homes,
Broken lives.

A sad ongoing cycle,
I'll love you today,
But, I'll hate you tomorrow.

Monday, December 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: social behaviour
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 0900am 3 December 2018. Looking at my Christmas Card list, preparing to send cards to friends and family near and far.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 01 February 2019

I appreciated very much getting your Christmas card. As you say, Christmas can be a sad time for some people.

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bri edwards 30 December 2018

(cont.) 2. AND saying I'm sorry, even if not completely meant OR deserved, can do wonders sometimes to 'keep things going'. so, i think this poem is too pessimistic and your December Wish is too optimistic. ;) bri

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bri edwards 30 December 2018

1. i've had 3 divorces and they weren't the 'end of the world' for anyone i know of. they were liberating for most people involved, ...though my 3rd wife (she divorced me) regretted her decision later. but, sure, some divorces may be worse than staying married. i like marriage 'cause it sort of keeps me or 'her' from giving up too easily. (cont.)

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Kim Barney 19 December 2018

I've always thought red and green were Christmas colors. I learn something new every day!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Yeah social sad episodes among families can dampen festive seasons as you describe in a fine realistic poetic way. Hoping it's a season of family love and joy for you sir so the blues are in the poem eloquence only. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places. And merry Xmas in advance.

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