Decipher Poem by Rachel Butler

Decipher

Rating: 5.0


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


Rarefied the paradigm of his face, behold cupped in my hands, velleity inclination to hear those dulcet tones?

His agile, graceful frame, rivals the rising and setting sun with Amrita he filled my cup, shall I live unquenched?

Lest masquerade over, he stands before me. Redeem love, lovers honey wine lips are adroit.

Profound the depths when he appears, lover's nourishment, betwixt and between.

Embrace,
adieu, adieu!

Sparrow

Thursday, February 9, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard McClellan 09 February 2012

Very nice poem Rachel. LOL, when love is real, it can be of real nourishment can't it. Thanks for sharing. God bless

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Renu Kakkar 20 July 2015

Farewell pom, nicely worded.

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Danny Draper 23 February 2012

A strong but kind farewell. The future is bright and love awaits. When reading this I had flashes of, TS Elliot's the Love song of J Alfred Prufrock, which is most certainly not a bad thing. Nice work. Cleansing of a relationship is akin to a cleansing ale. Discuss.

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Howard Johnson 14 February 2012

Enjoyed reading such a beautifuly written piece, thank you for sharing.

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Eric Cockrell 13 February 2012

stunning! passionate imagery!

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Dave Walker 09 February 2012

A really great poem, your wording always amazes me. Great write.

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