Dedication To A Friend Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Dedication To A Friend

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My mind wandered,
and sought pleasure
in the harlotry of illusions.
In the uncertainty of emotions,
in the labyrinth of inconsequence.

A tumultous uproar,
an upbringing of chaos.
And with a thundering applause,
a downpour of bliss.
From heavens above,
like a God-blown kiss.
Like an orchard,
in my broken lands of agony.

That's how you poured on me.

Tuesday, October 28, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: dedication,uncertainty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pooja Ladyluck 29 October 2008

gr8..........trust me........i luved it.......kewl........m lyk.........wow.......is tat 4 me........taz da best poem sum1 has ever dedicated to me.......n seems lyk.....it'll b da best thruout my lyf.....thanx yaar.......thanx a lot! ! !

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2008

GOD does rain on the GOOD & EVIL

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Kshitiz Gupta 26 February 2012

Great work Sarvesh :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 December 2009

Here lows followed by highs …excellent conceptualization… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ajinkya Deshpande 06 November 2008

yaar, u really seem to be in a different zone when u write poems! this one is truly fantastic

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Deepti Agarwal 06 November 2008

its a beautiful dedication fr someone who means a lot.. :) loved it..

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Kesav Easwaran 31 October 2008

a very good dedication here...nicely performed...10

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