Dawn Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Light reveals the one,
in its manifold wonders,
in its magnificent hues.
The infatuating darkness,
wraps the various,
in its complete uniformity,
in the infinite surrounding.

The dawn,
with the fusion of two,
gathers faith from its womb,
and manifests the hope,
of one complete wisdom,
unscarred by the
shallowness of knowledge,
illumined by the being of
unattributed purity,
a speechless cadence
of unmeaning words…
in the inkless canvas
of unassumed abstraction…
concretely stamping the thump
…of climactic culmination....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 12 January 2009

wow.! ! ....you create such wonderful words into a wonderful poetry... with vivid picture of the beauty of dawn...like a painting in front of me... i was bewildered by the beauty of your work... .i like the way how you put the negative words into it to create an amazing piece as a whole... a beautiful dawn...a beautiful new day.... 10++++++++++++++++

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Pooja Ladyluck 23 December 2008

b'ful.........as always i repeat ma words again and again for each poem........well.......it got me thinkin.....deep........the experssions r amazing.......thanx! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2008

liked the choice of your adjectives...

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Anjali Sinha 17 December 2008

yes your poem reminds me of mine Sound of Silence--- The morning dawns, with the pellucid rosy tint on the buds, The rustle of the perfunctory cool breeze, . awakens the birds and the bees. A nice cool one Sarvesh certainly a ++++++10 anjali

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