Tear-Drop Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Tear-Drop

Rating: 5.0


Moments come and go,
Leaving their footprints upon my path.
The ambience that surrounds
Completes me.

A tear-dropp of my being,
Gathers in my eye.
I try to hide it,
But it reveals me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 11 September 2008

Short and beautiful.

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C T Heart 11 September 2008

just human to fell and experience such...fine lines...keep on writing.

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Kesav Easwaran 11 September 2008

good revealing poem drops...keep posting poems, Sarvesh...ten for your impressive show up write...

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Ric Bastasa 12 September 2008

very revealing of the poetic in you.. nice work

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Indira Babbellapati 12 September 2008

well, wht do i say about one who writes with such deep thought at this age...!

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Little Morning Star 04 January 2009

tears, something that express our feeling, which is sad or glad.. well penned..

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Anjali Sinha 28 November 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! dropp a tear I cry +++++10 regards anjali

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

A tear dropp u want to hide it; but it reveals u! ! ! ! Wow! Terrific piece..........great poem..................10++++++++++++++++++++

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Pooja Ladyluck 10 October 2008

gr8 thought! ! ! amazingly portrayed.......

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Rakhi Jayashankar 29 September 2008

each tear dropp has its own power to reliev the pain to maeke us feel goood n lt mre

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