Disoriented. Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Disoriented.

Rating: 4.2


Unwanted, here i lie,
like an appendix.
removed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 03 April 2009

that can be really painful....sad but expressive.....10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

simply..mind blowing and brilliant short bur GREAT

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Indira Babbellapati 15 April 2009

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Catrina Heart 09 April 2009

This was a heart wrenching poem. Appendix is a part of a book with essence, meaning you are part of the world invaluable, though disoriented.........lovely!

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Miriam Maia Padua 06 April 2009

ohhh...sad so touching short yet lines can squeezed the heart.... very expressive....beautiful 10++++

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'Unwanted' or betrayed? Lol... 'Diamonds are girls' best friends...' as it seems... but sometimes they might leave unexpectedly like a cat leaving behind, betrayed this time, the later part... Let’s wait and see... Thank you for sharing :)

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