Deed.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Deed....

Rating: 5.0


Lord Divine
that is God
My God and of all other
same believers

but when your friend
never forgets
to lit a candle for you
everytime she goes
anytime she goes
despite her woes
she light that candle

I have such a friend
She lits candles every Sunday
especially for me, and handle
me as a very special friend

I feel so blessed very much
yes as such loving things occurred
it is never never absurd
a friend who is litting candles for me
each time she goes to church
she regards me as special
and lits a candle especially for me

through this poem
I wanna tell her that I am touched
very much
since she knows me
she is writing about beautiful quotes
most of them are notes
from the Holy Bible

IF I may say
God's Love is shining upon she
she regards me as a special friend
I don't know since when

My Lord Divine
I thank Thee for she
she is shining all sobriety
of her inner smartness
and of course in her poetry

I am telling her constantly about Thee
Thy life, love and miracles
Not as an automatic-me,
but as a true being-me

Thy Love for mankind is so greatest
even Thy smallest words is grandest
this kindest friend is smartest
she understands all the quotes she read
from morn till nightimes on her bed
I just know that,
to me she has not said….


AD. Sunday on the 1st of July 2018
@ 10.45 hrs AM. West-European Time

Deed....
Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,god,lord
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A smart poetess, her mind possesses the best of poetic words
usually she goes to the temple she used to go as a child with her mum, also as a teen, to pray to the gods/god, but since she knows me, she goes to her church in town and since we ever met, she lits a candle for me and she prays for my well being. I never say something aboiut all her latest activities, but now after I had been to Ghana with my spouse, and especially this Sunday morning come these words to my mind and I worked them out as a (lengthy)poem. I am now content and grateful to God, that I have given a description about her enormous sobriety in all her being, her great talent about creating her poems.

written with much care and love,
Sylvia Frances Chan
Dutch Poetess, Evangelist, World Traveler, Photographer

AD. SUNDAY the 1st of Juky 2018
@ 10.46 hrs. AM West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

This poem is another master piece from memories of Ghana. We are believers of God. His Divine grace we feel each day. Lighting a candle is nice duty to perceive light. Feeling blessed with loving nature is great really. A friend who is lighting candle for you and praying before God is fortunate. This poem is very tender, affectionate and beautifully drafted. This is an outstanding poem...10

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I am personally intense glad that you have given here your worthy response and feedback which I appreciate most and have much respect for the way you defined the things here. Your constant support means a very lot to me, as a member here on PH. Thank you so much, Mr. Kumarmani. God's Blessings upon you be in Abundance always. Thank you for the 10.

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